Thursday, February 20, 2025

Visual Communication

Graffiti is one of the few tools you have if you have almost nothing.
~Banksy


Happy Poetry Friday! I've got two poems for you today. The first one is mine and has a side story. I'm doing a Coursera poetry class with Denise (called Sharpened Visions) and one of the prompts was to take the rhymes from someone else's poem and use them in the same order. I picked Longfellow's The Arrow and the Song.

At first I had trouble coming up with a poem because his was stuck in my head. I had to think of a very different topic to send me off in another direction. I picked graffiti, which must have come to mind because I am going to be making graffiti for my birthday in a couple of weeks. (Although this is a lawless age, mine will be law-abiding, never fear.)

Rap it, as best you can:

GRAFFITI

Spray paint shakes, shoots through the air--
A word from a can freed to go where
It lands on a wall and gives in-sight--
Not every wall catches words in-flight.

Go outside, breathe unplugged air--
What you seek finds you out there.
Start out weak and wrap up strong,
Listen up hard for a skeleton song--

That's all you need to sprout a mighty oak--
The bones, the seeds, your acorn unbroke.
It's not like the end is even the end--
The painted-over wall is still your friend.

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Our second poem is by Sophia Thakur:



Laura Purdie Salas has the Poetry Friday round-up. Thanks, Laura!

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Love the vibe and energy of the Graffiti poem. You've made the rhymes all your own. Well done!

laurasalas said...

Fabulous, Tabatha! "Not every wall catches words in-flight." That's brilliant. xo

Linda B said...

Feels like a lot of song in your post today, Tabatha. Though I can't always understand the words, I love rap and watching rappers. I read yours aloud & tried! And, it felt like it was working! I enjoyed that 2nd verse so much! And, the video, lovely to see and hear!