I view poems as a magic invitation (for writer or reader, adult or child) to sit for a while with a question or sensation, and explore it in your own way.
~Kate Wakeling
For Poetry Friday, what looks like a fun mentor poem to me! Kate Wakeling's Some Other Names for Rain:
Some Other Names for Rain
by Kate Wakeling
I call you the eyelash rinser
and windowpane racer.
I call you cloud soup.
I call you the tongue tickler,
sock seeper,
hair hassler
and ankle surpriser
(when paired with a passing car).
I call you sky spittle.
I call you leaf polisher.
I call you the pavement drummer
and umbrella summoner.
I call you a brigade of micro water bombs
having a skirmish with the lawn.
I call you the puddle artist
who will only draw circles.
I call you a sprinkle of ocean,
far from home.
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TeacherDance has the Poetry Friday round-up. Thanks, Linda!
11 comments:
Thank you for this rain poem, Tabatha! (I collect rain poems for my rain-loving son.) xo
It is one to keep, you're right, Tabatha. I adore all that she shared about rain, something it feels like we know little about here. I'd love to have some of that "sky spittle" or "pavement drummer". Thanks!
I love this - and agree it would be a great mentor poem. I especially like 'sky spittle'. Thanks for sharing.
Absolutely fanTAStic! Consider this already shared with middle schoolers! Thanks so much.
This is a great one, leading in all kinds of directions for exploring! Let me go meet this Kate Wakeling now...
Wonderful and sooo fun, I love the art too, and so many of the lines. I've already saved it to pin up–great pic too, thanks Tabatha!
Oh! This is wonderful! I love all these creative ways to think of rain. It's essentially full of kennings, isn't it (minus the hyphens)? As others have mentioned, this is a fabulous mentor poem. Thanks so much for sharing it, Tabatha!
Ooh...yes! I feel a poetry prompt coming on, NEVERMORES! Thanks for sharing this, Tabatha!
I have another name for rain -- sleep-disrupter! But I'm not complaining. It has been a gift to get a .7" soaker so that I don't have to unroll the hose today. (So it's also a hose-rester...okay, I'm in. It's a great mentor poem. Off to copy it into my notebook!)
Tabatha, what a fun poem you've shared today. I wonder how long it took her to collect/come up with all those synonyms for rain. I especially love the closing: "a sprinkle of ocean / far from home."
Ha! I’m listening to rain patter on our rooftop while reading this. I guess I should call it roof tapper. Ha! Fun poem.
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