Sometimes I like a challenge. Today's experiment was a "reverso," inspired by Marilyn Singer's Mirror Mirror. Ms. Singer wrote a book of fairy tale-inspired poems that are meant to be read top to bottom, and bottom to top. (Read a very clever review of it here and you can see pages of it here.)
Reversos tell two different stories depending on which direction you begin, and my poem tells the same story both ways. So my daughter suggested calling it a "same-o."
Raven Revers-same-o
Lenore!
I grieved.
In my heart,
Night fell.
I feared
The ghostly spirits.
I ran
to my window,
laughed to see
only a raven.
Will I be happy?
Nevermore,
cried the Raven.
Cried the Raven,
Nevermore
will I be happy.
Only a raven
laughed to see
to my window
I ran.
The ghostly spirits
I feared!
Night fell
in my heart.
I grieved
Lenore.
Back in April, The Miss Rumphius Effect had reversos as the Monday Poetry Stretch, and there were some impressive results! Want to try it?
Liz in Ink is hosting the Poetry Friday round-up today.
Wow, Tabatha. This is an awesome version of the Raven. Impressive! I love "Mirror, Mirror." What a clever book.
ReplyDeleteReversos are tricky! I've only been able to make mine same-o, too! Yours is great!
ReplyDeleteClever!
ReplyDeleteLOVE it, and inspired by one of my favorite books of the year!
ReplyDeletelike a poetic palindrome. sort of. i like, i like! and the perfect month to be mulling over some poe.
ReplyDeleteVery clever! I really need to try one of these but I'll be honest and say the thought intimidates me. Yours came out great!
ReplyDeleteThank you, everyone! I have guests and haven't had a chance to check out the round-up yet, but I am looking forward to it.
ReplyDeleteI have not tried this form either. I am intimidated by it too. You've done a wonderful job!
ReplyDeletechallenging
ReplyDeletemost
of us,
this form
requires
the parsing of
each thought
each thought,
"'the parsing of'
requires
this form
of us."
most
challenging!
mine all come out as absurdos. : )
Heidi, "absurdo" is a great name! I would like reading more of yours.
ReplyDeleteThis is hauntingly cool. If you put another one up, will you tell about your process? It seems this one is intimidating many of us, me included!
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Awesome, Tabatha! Thanks for sharing it. I haven't tried this--I'm guessing absurdo is how mine would come out, too, Heidi:>)
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